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A Happy Painting by ~WTFA54:iconWTFA54:



Your life’s a picture
A pastel painting; a fixture
On an empty wall
Next to nothing at all.
So picturesque it’s
Perfect in every way
And time won’t mar you
Won’t burn and scar you
Just leave you hanging alone.

An empty museum
With just one exhibit
You have it all
To roam the halls
Late at night when you’re alone.
Day breaks; no one ever comes
Why would they?
What do you have to say?

A happy painting has no appeal
A happy painting isn’t real.

Time is leaving you behind as
You grow old it’ll just get worse:
It’s been too good
Far too good for the likes of you.
Nowhere to go, to run away to
The paint, as it’s dying it cracks.
Perfection rarely ever lasts
So end it, end it all before you,
Lose control; you’ve peaked
There’s nowhere left to go.

End it, end it all now
You can only go down.
©2009 ~WTFA54
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Author's Comments

i write best past midnight. I really like this right now, but i think that's because i'm the only person who could possibly follow the flow. This was greatly inspired by No Surprises by Radiohead. I actually wrote this originally to the rhythm and flow of the song, and it still works to a certain extent, but i tried to deviate from that form. Again, this might be hard to follow.

i wrote this thinking about a theme i've been exploring. Basically, the idea is, if you've had a perfect life and decide, not through angst or anything like that, to commit suicide, then why is it tragic?

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